Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Lover. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, August 6, 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Xavier
ReplyDeleteGreat work with your reading task this week. It is clear that you were able to evaluate the effectiveness of the two biographies that we read in class.I love how you included a conclusion at the end of your checklist of what the author missed out on. Keep up the good work :)
Miss Lover
Thank you :)
DeleteHi Xavier,
ReplyDeleteGreat thinking with your reading work. This knowledge will be so useful for writing your biography.
Mrs Roach